Wednesday, 27 February 2013

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It was time to by new belt. He had to buy another one. He was going to buy from the thrift store this time. There would be other finger prints on it and he might not get caught. The waitress came by and refilled his coffee mug with strong dark French roast coffee. This morning he had decided to go to the Lemon Tree café. As she poured the coffee in the mug he thought about undoing his belt that he had on and strangling her right there in café. It was practically dead in the café anyways. Maybe he could sneak into the back and hide somewhere waiting for her to pass through the kitchen and bathroom area and then he could get her. But the time was not right on the clock so he guzzled down his second cup of coffee and left the café. He hope if he killed the right one tonight it would in a different area of town and the cops would to confounded and lead them into believing that a death was self-inflicted. It wasn’t murder really . He was helping them get to heaven. We all have to go there, sometime.
The streets outside were littered with garbage and homeless people begging for extra change, just to get through the day and looking for a cup coffee. The seawall was littered with people walking their dogs , riding their scooters or bicycles and roller staking. The seawall nearly, circumnavigates Stanley Park. It follows the ocean from English Bay and Coal Harbour and it goes North around Prospect Point. It runs East from English Bay to Science World , then West to Kitsilano Pool. Also the Seawall runs East from Coal Harbour along the shores of the Burrard Inlet to and West of Canada Place. Detective Stone's office was a above old convince store near Patrice place hotel. There was large window overlooking English bay and seawall. To left of the window was Edward’s computer and an odd assortment of office supplies. Next the small clutter bookcase of criminology and religious book was litter box for the cat. There was old distinctive Aeron computer chair. On the front the door hung sign which read Edward Stone Private Eye. He was Edward Stone, Private detective. And he had investigated some the most malice crimes known to men. Edward Stone was a five foot eleven and a had salt and pepper hair. On his desk laid three cases. A fire at a local tool shop, a break and enter at a new age store and a dead on arrival at a local church. He flipped through the files causally. His wife had already been trough them and made several notes. 1. They all happened in Vancouver and there is a religious connection. 2. It close to Halloween and the Vortex on evil spirits is open . 3. It is a Full moon tonight . He browsed through rest of files and began to daydream as fingers played with the medical bracelet, he was wearing. It was for his diabetes. Rousing him out of lovely daydream about Samantha his long time lover, the phoned chimed. He sighed and picked it up. "Hello, Detective Edward Stone; Private Eye, at your service" He said in to the receiver. A woman's voice came on the other end. "Hello, this is Mrs. Benson. My daughter, Estelle, is missing." She said. Edward could hear muffled sounds of her crying and talking at the same time. It was hard to understand the rest of what she said.
"Missing? How long has she been gone? He asked."Two days." She said. " I called the police but the they said that she was probably at a friend's house or that she had run away." Address?" He asked as he grabbed a ball point pen as she spoke. He jotted down her address and said he would there around two with his partner in tow. Just then he heard someone running up the steps to second floor.
Chapter 2
  • It was Tyler Vine, his partner. Tyler Vine worked homicide part-time at the Vancouver police office about two days week. The other three days of the week he worked with private detective Edward Stone. Tyler walked into the cramped office and past by Hue Cardamom the genitor . Tyler and Edward and Adam knew that their was serial killer running around on downtown Vancouver. and theythat he causing the deaths, and their only hope that the killer would make mistake And only then could they catch. But this was not a cop show where only few hours would past and they would find their killer. They didn't even know if the killer was going to strike again or if the murders that had already occurred were related. The Three Detectives just were going on instinct and a hunch. The murders themselves could be connected by one clue and only one. All were murdered brutley in downtown Vancouver and they were all women and they had been killed by the same method. Stranglatution by a belt, around the neck. The murders could have been crimes of passion or even Manslaughter: and the murderer was someone causes the death of another through extreme indifference to human life. The murders of the women Edward and his team had found in the past few days were sufficient enough in motive and premeditation so that manslaughter was not the type of crime. The women had met foul play and were all at the wrong place and time. There was however no evidence that similar in each case of death to connect the murders together other then the method of death in all the cases. In all the murders the only injury that occurred was around the neck and it was always in the same manner. Not A shot to the side of the head, in the mouth, or to the front of the chest is usually suicide and the Wounds located on the women incanted to Craig Norse the medical examiner it was most likely homicide. If it was suicide there would be evidence not constinct with that they had strangled themselves with a belt. And the neck was the only contact area of the murders . It was not a gun because a gun had contact range,and would cause a burn mark around the wound and leave gunpowder residue. In these murders the weapon that was used in all was a black, brown or white belt tighten and tightened around the neck on the victim until his prey died.
Tyler said hello as passed by and he noticed the was dark stains on the back of shirt and on the front. “Dam coffee machine exploded on me said the genitor. Tyler went up the desk and Mrs. ALL-Brightness poured the arsnic poision into the coffee. It was not enough to kill anyone but it would set the body’s circuits on coma for six weeks or more. Tyler did not see this and walked over to coffee pot twenty three minutes later. He consumed six or more cup of toxic coffee unknowingly. Vine flipped the pages of resumes on desk until he reached Taralyn's . He glance once and blinked at the resume and then stood up greet her and then fell flat on back and passed out. Taralyn rushed to the phone and dialed 911. The police arrived with amblunce in tow around 15 minutes too late. Tyler Vine slipped deeper into the coma which would last six months and he would survive and end up blind and he would need a guide dog. Yes he would be a blind detective. These words steeped into Taralyn's head as she watched the ambulance arrive o the scene. Edwards heard none this commotion going on in the other room because he was engrossed in his files.
Chapter 3
The ambulance was the first to arrive on scene and followed by reporters and Jehova Witnesses handing out flyers sat their usual juncteries. Every day Samantha would work in café baking an assortment of delicessy only found in the café and mildly priced them gave out sosasp box therapy and karookee and tell your stories for her customers. Her stepfather , Hue Cardamom worked in building as the genitor. Samantha’s oringal dad had died at age 52 of lung cancer and tumor. But left his daughter with 40 grand. Today Samantha began to read the daily five papers that reached her doorstep at the café. She would collect and cut out articles on mental health and Try to associations to help the viticms of homelessness in Vancouver. This was not an easy feet. Suddenly the cops and paramedics ran into the café and into the elevator. The other two parpmeditcs ran up the stairs. Samantha knew that somehow Tyler vine was in one foot in the grave. She began to pray for him and spoke his sacred name, Thor! As the parmedics rushed him down Royal Columbia where the was only 15 MIR machines and out of those 15 MIRS only six were working today. In his office Edward walked around his desk wearing groove in the carpet and knitting. Yeah knitting was his hobby. He stopped knitting and dropped needless to the floor and then opened the door only see dramatic spray of cameras people waiting at lobby. Hi old sectary , Mrs. ALL-brightness had fled the coop with her finger prints on the poisoned coffee maker. Not single person had seen her put the syrine of poision in the coffee. Then Stone saw Tyler Vine lying on the floor and then lifted him on to the gurney. It was total chaos. Repoters begin to aim questions and their camera at the scene. Edward slammed the door to his office and locked. Some where down on east hastings the new age store his sister owned had been broken into. Edna was in her car a had become transfixed by the scene of broken glass and graffiti. She knew the girl who missing in the valley,because she often stopped the bookshop. Ednas bookshop as newage and wiccan. She shook her headand began debate aboutwhat vanilzied in store. In last ditch effort she got out her car to get better look at destruction and at that moment she decided to call her brother.
Just then his cell phone rang. And the cat cooed to it. He answered. It was from his sister Edna. She said someone broke into the store.
Maybe l'll read the paper, thought Detective Stone. Maybe there will be some leads. Maybe I'll get the feeling or vision from it he thought. God he hated those things. Then the voices might come. In a dream he might be told what happened. Maybe he would get an image on where she was that Benson kid. She was so young. He hoped she would still be alive. Where did she go? She was missing again or did she runaway? he asked himself. Maybe she did this constantly. But he had that old feeling. It was something more. He picked up the paper, the Vancouver Sun and started reading it. His eyes latched on the article heading. Body discovered in Barnet Marine Park. He wondered if it was her. Maybe I should stop the crime seen and see If
I pick on anything he thought. At two o'clock in the afternoon Detective Edward Stone,
and Davie Haywire, chief inspector of violent crime in Vancouver, arrived at the town house of Mrs. Benson. Mrs. Benson was tall and her hair hung around her fair face in short stylist bob. The officers made notes of the Mrs Benson missing daughter and took her picture to circlate around the city.
Edward daily journal chapter 5 Thursday, July 2, 2009
Words in crossword found detective edward stone day one
Note1: Bible, Bogandinskoye church communion deacons devine dnieper feast hair humanitarians icons kanansky, lake shartash life marry mass montarteries moscow Murom novo tikhvisky nuns past prying priesthood restored rise roots saints and running shoes! So later Edward emails this clever little thing to his neighbor and he includes what he found the daily crossword puzzle . The neighbor goes online and emails Edward a one line comment. This seems to puzzle Edward until he shows the email to his wife. The email his neighbor sent said: A Jehovah Witness will die in Vancouver Today.
Chapter 6
T he creek
Wednesday, February 25, 2009
Crime scenee note s CASE NUMBER: 000232-200 Crime scene notes by Edward stone private detective:He checked them off as he went along reading through notes of various titles on articles in the paper and then added cross refernced them with crimes happening in the city. His notes looked like this.1. photograph everything before moving or touching anything2.Collect fragile evidence on the body3. Collect other types of evidence
Remove hair, fingernails and other trace evidence. Place in waxed paper, bindle them, and place them in envelopes. Brush head hair and pubic region (if naked). Hold butcher paper under the area you are brushing. Book paper into evidence. Remove trace evidence from skin and clothing from entire body with scotch pads or lint rollers. Only use frosted tape. Take from face, hands, feet, legs, torso, pubic area and neck. Collect samples of pooled blood. Use hemasticks to confirm it is actually blood
Collect control samples (as close to the area as possible) Use cotton swab with one drop of distilled water on it. Place the swab in wax paper loosely and then place it in an envelop. Break stick if necessary.
Place in freezer Collect exemplars Environment (vegetation, soil, maggots, other) Residence (carpet fibers, paint, misc. fibers, other) Vehicle (carpet fibers, seat fibers, roll the tires, vin number, wheel base)
Animals (hairs, bedding) Collect blood samples from victim using "Sexual Assault Evidence Collection Kit" blood tubes Collect fingernail clippings. Use toothpicks if nails are very short. Swab bite marks or Swab oral cavity
Chapter 7
Samantha Eliza Stone was writing down her witchcraft notes for her Research paper. She wrote down the following note before she sucked into virtual vortex in her café. (Back in the Medieval times it was common to believe the Devil was carrying out his evil handiwork. ) As the vortex seeped in the room genteelly and caught Samantha it felt like this to her.
It felt like my entire body was being sucked into this vortex of blinding white pain, pain that spread to every inch of ... The balls continue being sucked down in the current resulting in a vortex shape like a tornado. As the bottom of balls hit the blade of the propeller….the water is being sucked in and drawn into the void. ... Now you hold your breath because you don't know what's happening in the void. ...She slipped deeper and deeper.
Through the door of this vortex Samantha’s angel guide walked into the room and took her in the astral plane. Leaving her physical body in perfect coma. She woke up 3 hours later with mild case of amnesia holding a knife over one of a picture of her own picture. She dropped her ceremonial knife just as he husband arrived on scene and asked her if there were any new information on Estelle or anything he could grasp about the various happening in Vancouver that could be information on the possible connection of the various religious crimes that had occurred in the city. Samantha sighed and said talk to the homeless in the café and went back to her essay research paper. Edward went over to a man who called himself Celebrant. Edward asked if he knew anything about the crimes happening the town. Celebrant didn’t answer him exactly but told him a section of life story which seemed like to Edward it could be possible the was a connection with this peiece of info even if it was complete Rubbish. So he listened. And this is what he recorder on digital voice recorder. Jacques Robidoux starved his son to fulfill a religious vision that his sister had regarding the baby's diet and so will you. You will find a Jehovah Witness in Vancouver holding magazine and she will be dead
Chapter 8
Edna calls her brother and receives a bad cell phone connection. So she takes the dog for walk. Then receives rebounding call from Taralyn the assistant at Detective Stone's office. Later Joan Hamara model in city is missing her dog and someone threatened on her cell phone. She is also in city election for mayor of vancouver.
As she therei her car Edna became tranfixed by the scene of broken glass and graffiti. She knew the girl who missing in the valley,because she often stopped the bookshop. Ednas bookshop as newage and wiccan. She shook her headand began debate aboutwhat vanilzied in store. In last ditch effort she got out her car to get better look at destruction
Barnet marine park ,body discovered, the heading read the local paper. It was the Surrey leader. It was printed in the Province and Vancouver Sun. It wasn't in the Global , yet or world news. But he wanted it to be in there. He wanted in all the newspapers. He wanted them to know what he did and why. He wanted to promote his cause. He wanted them see the carange that society and world was promoting. That was why it happening why he did it. of Course it could have been the pills too.
Chapter 9
Article in the Vancouver Sun The Province (Vancouver), Vancouver Sun ... 3 dead. 3 women all prosuites dead. Women are under watch
So the cauldron boiling over again as she worked her magic. The liquid was dripping over the pot and slipping and bubbling out of it and it to the carpet. The spell she was weaving lead her into a different world. A world where she could be seen as what wanted be seen and hear no evil, see evil and do no evil. But even in this world she would not happy and it would turn its back on her.
Samantha sighed as she begin cleaned up the blood on floor. The detectives and police had been there for hours on end. Thankfully she had cast a spell for the fairies to come help her. Belinda her sister was coming over dinner. Just then the Benson kid walked. She was dripping wet from the rain. “Excuse miss could help me? She asked. Just then a elf entered the coffee shop and disappeared, taking the girl with him. He also erased, Samantha’s memory. Then Tyler walked. He lit a cigar and begin playing with one the Fairies. Curiously Samantha looked and said :”Who are you? “ “I am Tyler Vine. I have been your friend for 12 years.” “I am married ? “ she asked him and then she fainted and fell into a deep sleep, right in a pool of blood. “Better phone the doctor. “Vine said to the fairy and magically his cell phone floated out of his coat pocket and in to his hand. He dialed 911. The 911 operator came on the phone:”Hello .” The connected was bad. Must be the power shield Samantha around the coffee shop. He had seen shield spell in the notebook she had left opened on the counter. “Better get ambulance down Georgia and Homer . The Starbucks’s café owner has fainted .” “Which one ? “said the operator. “The one across from the library., next to the pizza shop.” The phone cut out and then another Elf appeared . He was holding a bag of rubies with him and pick axe. Curiously he looked around and said “ Wrong place!!” “I’m looking for Detective Stone.” Said the Elf. “well I am his best friend and officer of the police. “ Is that so? Said the elf.
Today the streets were littered with garbage and people begging for change to get a cup of coffee or piece pizza. Eastside hastings, downtown and it was thrusday.
Lighting was streaking across the sky and rain was pounding down and cats dogs were singing in streets of nearby bug infested and infested apartments. These apartments were bachelor suites that provide substranded livig and slumlords. Most were basically rundown places and motels with furnished rooms and no lundry pets or smoking or drugs. It was just another day for Edward and Tyler Vine. However as Tyler Vine enter the building and walked in to the Evaltor. The elevator was old and many people had died in this building he could see spirits floating around him. Hands gathered around his neck and some one tried stangled him. He closed his eyes until the images snd feelings he was having in elveor tar . He hoped it would be Mrs.ALL- Brightness last day. The elevatored stopped on the fifth floor and opened in to small lobby. Today the lobby was filled with twenty five people all applying for the job. Out of them only one had the instincts to juggle the Sectary position and her name was Taralyn Milldred Rasmercy
Tyler went up the desk and Mrs. ALL-Brightness poured the arsnic poision into the coffee. It was not enough to kill anyone but it would set the body’s circuits on coma for six weeks or more. Tyler did not see this and walked over to coffee pot twenty three minutes later. He consumed six or more cup of toxic coffee unknowingly. Vine flipped the pages of resumes on desk until he to Rasmercy’s. He glance once and blinked at the resume and then stood up greet her and then fell flat on back and passed out. Taralyn rushed to the phone and dialed 911. The police arrived with amblunce in tow around 15 minutes too late. Tyler Vine slipped deeper into the coma which would six months and he would survive and end up blind and he would need a guide dog. Yes would be the blind detective.

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